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My english competence in 2014

My best written evidence:

My best oral evidence:

I have chosen these two posts as the best ones in my blog so now I’m going to comment them one by one.

Firstly, as the best written evidence I have chosen the post about the dreams and goals related with the Obama speech.

In the personal level I have chosen this post because I loved his speech and it impressed me a lot. I think that since that day I changed my mind in studies because it’s a hard motivational speech which caught me. In addition I chose this essay because I talked about my dreams and goal so I think it defines me in this aspect.

Moreover, in the linguistic level I think that it has a well-organized structure with several linking words (In addition, however, moreover, to sum up…) to connect the text and with well-separated paragraphs including an introduction and a conclusion. Furthermore I think the vocabulary is very varied and the register is quite formal. Finally about the length, it is more than a hundred words so it’s a normal essay with the correct information.

As the best oral evidence I have chosen the post about the oral presentation of the sports injuries. In the personal level I chose that option because it was a personal topic related with my injury so I was interested on it and I had a great knowledge about the topic. In addition I think this is the video in which my voice it is heart clearer and in which I have seen I did it quite good in the body language.

In the linguistic level, I think the presentation resources were truly catchy because of the impacting images and videos that in my opinion made the presentation quite entertaining. Moreover I did the presentation without looking a lot to the paper and the pronunciation I think was quite acceptable and according to my level at that time.


To sum up I want to say that it haven’t been easy to choose the best post ( according to me ) because every post is personal and is about different topics so you can’t compare only the linguistic details and I’m proud of more than one post but I have chosen these ones considering different things and I hope you think like me.

My english progress from 2012-2014



The first and the last post



These are my first and my last posts in the blog and the first and obvious difference is the length of the essays, what I think is due to the increase of the confidence in the use of English and also to the knowledge of more vocabulary.

About the structures it’s easy to see the structure is completely different but it’s not better or worse because the first post have an email or letter structure while the last post is a “your-say” with a free structure. I think I ordered the information quite good I both posts separating it into different paragraphs but while in the first post I only used one connector to link the information on the last post I used connectors in the starting of almost every paragraph.

Related to the vocabulary I have that while in the first post I repeated words a lot of time (a lot of (3), good (2), summer(3)), in the last post I avoided repeating words. Moreover both compositions have more than 100 words and the register is appropriate to the extra linguistic situation.


About the content I think the last post is richer but is understandable because the first one was only an introduction of myself while the last one is a free your-say where I talked about a lot of different things.


Finally, as a curiosity, I want to emphasize that when I started the batxillerat I was convinced of my future and now I have no idea of what I will do. Moreover in general I think I have improved during these two years but it hasn’t been something spectacular.

The first and the last oral presentation

First oral presentation – Sports injuries:

Last oral presentation – Obesity and Overweight:


About the presentations comparing the two presentations I think I have improved in content and in vocabulary but in contrast I think that the last oral presentation was my worst one because I was very nervous and stressed with the exams. In general I’m proud of the content of all my oral presentations and of the prezis I have used because I think I have invested a lot of work on it. 

Moreover I evaluate myself on each presentation and I can see that the marks have been always similar in the fact that the aspect to improve always has been the body language so I have to admit that I haven’t improved my body language in presentations during these two years.

Interview

As you may know I’m having difficulties to decide what degree I will do the next year so it’s impossible to make an interview to an expert on my future job. Instead I will interview my cousin who lived a similar situation when she had to decide her degree.
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Sara is 27 years old and has a degree on Biology. Today I’m going to interview her but more for the option of the career than for her degree.

Hi Sara, thank you for staying her today to answer my questions. As you know it’s not easy to choose a degree because this decides all your future life. Can you tell me how your case was?
In my case I waited until the last week to decide the degree but I had though in degrees like journalism or art’s history. The last day for choosing I was ordering the degrees by preferences and then I saw biology and in a crazy and fast decision I chose it.

Have you ever regretted that election?
No, I have never regretted and in my degree all have been fantastic.

What do you do now in your job? It was what you expected when you started?
There are a lot of options in my degree but I deal specially with ecology and environment related with the companies. When I was at the high school I never thought in that future for me but now I love it, you can’t tell never no to an unknown option.

Can you give me some advices to choose good my future degree?
Don’t worry too much about the election, search information about the degrees related with the subjects you like and “don’t close doors to yourself” (Catalan idiom – keep all the options)

Thank you very much for being here today.

Human rights news

Summary:
In Venezuela the security forces have act violently, shooting people, in anti-government demonstrations. The public security forces are violating a lot of human rights and it’s seen that they aren’t isolated incidents. Moreover they are detaining people who go to the demonstrations against the government.

Opinion:

It’s obvious the government and the security forces are violating the freedom of speech and though, and we can even think they are torturing people by shooting them. In Spain the situation is not as serious but it’s true that there have been similar incidents with serious aggressions in some demonstrations. In my opinion what we can do now is to use the new technologies to denunciate this actions.


If I knew back then...

Dear Roger,

If I knew back then I wouldn't have changed many things because all the experiences I have lived for almost six years have made me become who I am now.

I won't tell you your future experiences or advise for particular cases. What i want to tell you are only some general advices for you, and I wish you took them in account.

Appreciete more every moment and every experience because as you may know in school things will become harder and harder but at the same time you will live a lot of new experiences.

Try to live all the experiences in a more intense way without thinking a lot of what other people may think, working harder and without worring about what you had done. 

I wish this was useful for you.

Have a nice future!

Roger Farrés.

Are we too dependent on mobile phones?

In the last ten years we have seen an important rise on the number of mobile phones and also on the device’s features. As a result of all the activities we can do with them, mobile phones have become an obsession.

Nowadays it isn’t difficult to see exaggerated situations where people make their mobile phones the priority and even if they are in a group they can be concentrated only on their mobiles without talking among them. However it can turn out useful when people who aren’t apart communicate with mobile.

In my opinion mobile phones should be a tool used to improve our lives and they aren’t supposed to become the centre of our lives.


To sum up, I think that we should be able to manage mobile phones on the appropriate circumstances and learn to appreciate use mobile devices as a tool when we have a difficult communication situation (like when you want to communicate with somebody who is abroad or when you are on danger…) to improve our lives.

Formal letter to the Human Rights Comitee

C/ Vilabertran nº 11
Castelló d’Empúries, Spain
17486
2nd April 2014

New York
Human Rights Committee
UN headquarters

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to enquire about the possible penalties that could suppose the violation of human rights. Moreover I’m writing to inform about the Spanish government actions which are violating human rights.

Currently, in Spain a lot of Human rights are not guaranteed like the right of moving freely for the countries. In this case the Spanish authorities are shooting African migrants to force them to go back to their countries when they try to cross the borderline. A second right which is being violated is the right to shelter because a lot of people are becoming homeless due to the crisis and the authorities are not helping them.

Would it be possible to advise Spanish government to guarantee the compliment of human rights? I would be grateful if you could keep an eye on the Spanish government actions to check on the current situation of the country.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,


Roger Farrés Catalán

Can money buy everything?; The moral limits of markets


Do we want a society where everything is up for sale or are there certain moral values and civic goods that markets do not honour and money cannot buy? That’s the question


In my opinion we live in a consumer society and we are always thinking in money and prices but I think money can’t buy everything at least for the moment. We can buy all the materialistic things but the most important things in life, which are the abstract things, like love, friendship, happiness… can’t be bought. Nowadays it’s true we can “buy” health, especially in places where there isn’t public health, and we are progressing more and more everyday so we don’t know if we will be able to buy happiness or things like that in the future but for the moment this things are the ones which resist the extreme marketization of our society. For this reason all us view these things like more pure or better because they aren’t “corrupted” by us. So these are the civic values or goods which money hasn’t been able to buy yet and in my opinion this have to follow like that because I think money should be only our tool to trade things or buy things and cannot be our goal or the reason of the different social classes.


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Human rights

The human rights are the fundamental rights entitled to the persons only by the fact of being human.

The human rights were created in 1948 and they were made to guarantee a minimum of human rights after all what had happened in the II World War. There are 30 human rights and they are written in The Universal Declaration of Human Right.

The 21st right is the right to democracy which is based 3 main points:
1. Everyone has the right to take part in the government of his country, directly or through freely chosen representatives.
2. Everyone has the right to equal access to public service in his country.
3. The will of the people shall be the basis of the authority of government; this will shall be expressed in periodic and genuine elections which shall be by universal and equal suffrage and shall be held by secret vote or by equivalent free voting procedures.


This right is respected in most the republics of the world and I say “most” because the existence of a republic doesn’t guarantee a truth democracy because it can exist several interferences in the suffrages. Where this right is not respected is in all the dictatorships of the world like in North Corea.

Education is the key, school is the lock

"Education is about inspiring one's mind not just filling their head"
Nowadays the education is usually repetitive and closed. For example, we have a closed syllabus that is almost repeated every year or another example is the exam questions which use to take for valid only closed and predetermined answers. This make us study only predetermined answers and don't let us think in the topic or in the problems which a theory may have. In my opinion, this have to be done it in this way in some subjects like the grammar in the languages but in a lot of subjects I think we should have more freedom which would be the only way to let us develop our own ideas and theories and start to questioning things.

"If you don't build your dreams, someone else will hire you to help build theirs"
Everybody knows is easier to work for others or to let somebody else to direct you because this let you without the responsibility of questioning things or solve the problems. This is the laziness everybody has, but if you want to achieve something in your live, if you want to fulfil your dreams you have to take control of your life and fight for what you want. If you don't try to achieve your goals, you will be under the direction of someone else who will use you as a tool to achieve their dreams.

"Regurgitating facts from a book on someone else's opinion"

Related with the first sentence, when you study on any subject you can't say your opinion so you only are remembering facts, dates and quotes. This use to be boring and can make you think that is useless. In this quote is compared this with regurgitating because you only swallow a lot of information quickly to then regurgitate it without having thought on it and finally forget it.

A soulmate for me

It is said that a soulmate is a person with whom one has a feeling of deep affinity involving similarity, love, romance, sexuality, compatibility and trust. The perfect soulmate depends on the own qualities so there isn't a universal model of soulmate and it's for this that is said that there's only a special soulmate for each one.

My soulmate doesn't have to have exactly the same qualities as me but she should be loyal and someone I could rely on. It could be someone who makes me laugh and with who I could spend a lot of time without being bored. It should be someone with who we have had a crush on each other and with whom love was always in the air. My soulmate has to be sociable, funny and attractive, if possible.

In conclusion I think everybody is always looking for their soulmate but all of us are too demanding and we finally don't appreciate what we have near us.

Empiricism related with "Pride and prejudice"


The first reference of the book to the empiricism appears just on the first sentence when it says “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife” which is similar to the starting sentence of Locke’s “Essay concerning human understanding”. In the Locke’s treatise or essay it starts saying something like this in reference to European rationalists who thought that there were innate ideas and universal ideas in the human moral and understanding, but in contrast, Locke thought that the innate ideas and the universal ideas didn’t exist, so he used that sentence ironically. In the same way Jane Austen, the writer of the book, uses this sentence ironically to say that a lot of people thinks that but it isn’t true or it shouldn’t be true, showing her clear feminist ideology.


The relation between the book and the empiricism is especially focused on the term prejudice. The empiricism defends that the knowledge is determined only by experience derived from sense perception. This could be confused with prejudice, but this sense perception that Locke defends is not the first impression or view using only a sense but a knowledge achieved by using all our senses and built with the repeated experiences. In the book we see that the prejudices are made by the first impressions or the first experiences but like the empiricism we need some repeated experiences and to know more details to get a good and a specific idea about people or about things.

Can Internet change the world for the better?

Nowadays Internet has become an important tool for our society because of the facilities it provides us in a lot of fields. However, Internet can have a hidden dark side. We have to consider both sides.

On the one hand, internet make easier to be robbed or swindled and moreover let us too exposed and we lose our privacy.

On the other hand, Internet allows us to make economic transactions in our home or even in our smartphone. This, for example, let us buy airplane tickets, to transfer money from the bank. In addition, Internet is a great tool to communicate more quickly all over the world. We can share or search easily a lot of information.

In conclusion, Internet helps us in a lot of areas and makes our life more comfortable but we have to be aware because there are a lot of hidden risks and you don’t know who is behind it.

My research project: Obesity and overweight (research paper abstract and self evaluation)


This project consists of the study of obesity and overweight in general and also in our high school. This project is divided in two main parts: the theoretical and the practical.  In the theoretical part I have talked about the causes, the consequences, the treatment, the current statistical data and other facets of the disease. The practical part is focused on the stigmatization and on the statistical data in our high school. The information obtained in the different practical parts has been used to establish comparisons and to understand the real situation of the obesity in our high school and trying to make a good reflection of our current society.


Finally, here I let you the presentation I used for my project to let you know a little bit about it. (in catalan)


Self-evaluation:

Here, I let you the self-evaluation of the oral presentation:

Roger Farrés: Research project (Ovesity and Overweight)
Presentation (10%)
Do you use any resources? Are the resources relevant and attractive and focused on the topic? Do they support your presentation? Is the timing 5-7 minutes?
Yes, I used Prezi as the main resource. Moreover I used some statistical graphics to make the iformation more understandable and to keep the audience focused on the presentation. The presentation lasted 7 minutes more a less.
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Body language and eye contact (10%)
Are you looking at your audience most of the time? Are you reading occasionally from your notes? Are you doing any gestures / movement to hold the attention of the audience?
I think that this was the worst part of my presentation because it’s difficult to look at the audience, and I used to watch a lot the screen and the paper. Moreover I think that the fact of make the presentation alone made that I became more nervous.
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Structure (10%)
Do you organize your ideas in order of importance? Do you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear?
Yes, I did an index to put the ideas in order, and I used some discourse markers.
9
Content (40%)
Do you introduce interesting, NEW information to your audience? Is your information detailed and clear? Do you give / show examples? Is your information copied from a source or is it original? Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the Internet/books…?
I think I did an interesting presentation with new and detailed information for all the audience showing them the theoretical part and the most relevant statistical data. Moreover I think I talked about the project from different points of view and from differet topics.
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Language (20%)
Is your grammar correct, complex? Is your vocabulary rich and varied? Do you use sentence linkers? Do you use pause fillers?
I think that I used a correct grammar, with a lot of topic-related vocabulary. About the linkers and the pause fillers I think I have used a few. Even though we can always improve and probably we can improve a lot of gramatical structures.
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Pronunciation and intonation (10%)
Do you know how to pronounce all your words? Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? Do you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?
I knew how to pronounce the words because I had searched on the google translator and in howjsay. I did it with some breaks to read or pronounce difficult words but in general I think I done it quite fluid. 
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Final Mark: (100%)
85%



As I has said before, I think that the worst part of my presentation was the body language. For this reason, I think this is the part I have to improve. Here, I let you the video of my presentation. Due to several problems it’s difficult to hear the sound and it finishes a minute before the presentation ends.


And finally here, I let you the prezi I used in the presentation:



Exam's writing

“Youth is the only thing that matters”

“But your beauty won’t last forever. When your youth goes your beauty will go with it”

Beauty is a very important thing but it’s not the most important thing. Beauty is related with youth, and it’s obvious we can’t be young forever so nobody can be beautiful forever. It’s important to recognize that, because if you don’t, you will be all your life trying to keep something that you can’t.

In contrast you can recognize the importance of beauty by taking advantage of it during your youth.

Moreover it helps you understand that everybody will lose their beauty so you can try to find (in you and in your pair) other important things that will last for ever.

In conclusion, beauty is important but is not the most important thing because it doesn’t last forever, so we must learn to appreciate other things in life.

Dialogue


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Scenario: Two men sit in a restaurant in Barcelona
Characters: Jaume and Roger


J: Oh man! I heard Claudia wants a boobs increase operation, you know.


R: Oooh really, good thing, she need it.


J: What??


R: This!


J:Sorry??


R: Claudia isn’t happy with herself and this will help her…, you know.


J: Do you think with this operation she will be happy??


R: Sure, big boobs can do wonders.


J: Well, her life isn’t a bed of roses… but I think she doesn’t need it


R: Yes, so this will be a change to better in her life, and also a sight for sore eyes.


J: You’re a fucking materialist, you will never find a girlfriend in your FUCKING LIFE!!!


(Everybody in the restaurant staring at them)


R:Ohh relax, my friend, you are a killjoy, don’t take it so seriously, mate.


J: Okay, I’m so sorry.


R: But you can be happy with your wife boobs size, can’t you?


J: Yeah, that’s true. You’re searching for one with big boobs too, aren’t you?


R: Yeah, your wife’s sister could be an option, couldn’t be?


J: Touch her and I will kill you!! Jajaja.


R: So you should already have killed me!


J: Why you have chosen her?

R: Because she have new big operated boobs, JAJAJA

Oral presentation: smartphones

Jaume, David and me did the other day the oral presentation about this topic: smartphones
We decided this topic because we think that smartphones are something very important in our life and they are becoming even more and more important. Nowadays we can do almost whatever with a mobilephone and a lot of people are investigating to achieve to do the few things we can't do yet.
Moreover this is becoming an obsession to a lot of people and they "live" without their smartphones.
For all this reasons we decided to do this project about this topic.


We used different resourses to develop this project. Specially we used google drive, and prezi because of the ease they provide us to work fast and don't have to meet everyday we want to do something.


The project:

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Smartphones

- Intro - def. and main features -Roger
Hello everybody, TGIF we are Jaume, David and Roger and we are going to show you a presentation about smartphones. Nowadays almost everybody have a smartphone and they have become one of the most important things in our life. Everyday we are using our smartphones for a lot of functions and we are becoming more and more depending on our smartphones. Moreover we can see that is becoming a serious dependence when we see that although we are in crisis, and a lot of people are without work, the mobile phones sells and their prices have remained or even have increased. For all these reasons we thought it was important to talk about this topic and become aware of this paradoxical situation.
Okay first of all it’s important to say that a smartphone is exactly a mobile phone with computer features that at least is able to send e-mails, and have access to internet.
Okay, so firstly we will explain you the history and the evolution of the smartphones, secondly David will talk you about the different operating systems, then we will explain together the most used or downloaded apps, then we will talk about environmental impact, social impact and finally about the future expected development.  Okay so now Jaume will start with the history:


- History: (creation, evolution (photo)): - Tots repartir


Origin of the term (Jaume)
The term "smartphone", however, did not appear until 1997, when Ericsson described its GS 88 "Penelope" concept as a Smartphone that was a device that combined telephony and computing.
Some manufacturers and providers use the term "superphone" for their high end phones with unusually large screens and other expensive features
With the advent of devices with larger screens, the term "phablet", a portmanteau of the words phone and tablet, had come into common usage by 2008.


Early years (Roger)
The first cellular phone to incorporate computer features was developed in 1992 and demonstrated that year at the COMDEX computer industry trade show. A refined version of the product was marketed to consumers on 1994 by BellSouth under the name Simon Personal Communicator. Apart from receiving calls,  Simon was also able to send and receive e-mails and pages through its touch screen display. Simon included many applications including an address book, calendar, calculator, world time clock, games, electronic notepad, handwritten annotations and standard and predictive touchscreen keyboards.
In 1996, Nokia released the second smartphone called Nokia 9000, part of the Nokia Communicator line, which became their best-selling phone of that time.
Between 2002 and 2004 HTC gained much popularity in Europe with their "Wallaby", "Falcon" and "Himalaya" models running the Windows Mobile Operating System. They were called Pocket Pc and when the other brands saw started developing their own smartphones.


The recent evolution (Costa)
In the last six years with the development of the first Iphones it started the gr
owth of sales of smartphones.  During all these years apple devices have been very popular but in the last two years Sony and especially Samsung have tried to improve their technology to compete with Apple.  These last years the two companies have had a hard “battle” and they have denunciate between them.


- Operating systems: Costa


The mobile operating systems (that is a collection of software that manages computer hardware resources and provides common services for computer programs) are the operating system that operates a smartphone, tablet, PDA, or another digital mobile device. The newest operating systems combine the features of a personal computer operating system with other features, including a touchscreen, Bluetooth, WiFi, GPS mobile navigation, camera, video camera, speech recognition, voice recorder, music player etc.
The most important ones are Android 72,4%, iOS 13,9%, Windows Phone 2,4%, Blackberry 5,3%, Bada 3,0%, Symbian 2,6%, Others: Palm OS and Windows Mobile 0,4%.  


- Most used apps: - Tots repartir
Communication apps:(Costa) The three apps that I’m going to explain are probably the most used for everybody. WhatsApp, Line and Skype, are in the communication apps, and are very useful because we can communicate to the other people using this apps.
  • WhatsApp: Maybe, if I ask in this class: who have whatsapp? Everybody will say yes. WhatsApp, it’s the most used application of the world. We use WhatsApp to ask the homework to our friends, to talk with girlfriends or boyfriends, to ask to your mother if she has already made the dinner and for a lot of more reasons. WhatsApp. WhatsApp, was made in 2009 and during these for years more or less, the creators                       of this app has earn more than 10 million of dollars. Finally, if we want to see how important is this app for us, we only have to see how many people use this application all around the world. We are more than 300 million. I think that this app has changed the communication in the world and it’s one of the best apps unless you have a bored friend.



  • Line: Line isn’t as popular as WhatsApp, but there are a lot of people that use this application. If you don’t know this application maybe it’s because you only use WhatsAPP, but there are a lot of people that prefers to use Line, I don’t know why because in my opinion it’s a copy of WhatsApp, but there are some differences between these applications. For example, Line it’s a social network, and WhatsApp not, LINE have different emoticons and the most important one is that with Line, you can phone and speak with other people like in a call.


  • Skype: Skype was founded in 2003 by Janus Friis from Denmark and Niklas Zennström from Sweden. With this applications, you can do video calls with your smartphone. You can talk to another person while you are watching them. It’s useful if you don’t want to write like in WhatsApp for example.


These three apps, are absolutely free.  


Social networks:(Jaume) With WhatsApp, this three apps are the most used for everybody. The reason is very simple, you can share information, photos, videos, talk with friends… so it’s very useful and entertaining. Everybody knows about these apps so I want to say some new things about this.


  • Facebook: This social networks was created for Mark Zuckerberg. Originally Facebook was used by students of an American university but they decided to open to all the people in the world approximately in 2004. Nowadays Facebook has 1100 millions of users all over the world, especially in USA, Brazil, Indian... 600 millions people have downloaded this app in their smartphones.
  • Instagram: This is a recent app created to share and retouch photos and videos with all the world. If you put some tags, you have the possibility that a person in USA can see your photo, if you don’t put the tags, only your followers can see your photos or videos. This app was created for Kevin Systrom in 2010. Only people who had iphones could have it, but in 2012 this app was in Google Play for all the Androids.
  • Twitter: Jack Dorsey create this app in 2006 and since this year Twitter became more and more popular. Nowadays, Twitter has more than 200 millions of users, every day Twitter generate 65 milions of tuits and more than 800.000 request of search.



Others: (Roger) Apart from the social apps that are the more used, there are a lot of other applications that we use everyday only for entertainment or because they facilitate our life.
  • Games define the first group and the success of these ones is based on the entertainment they provide that usually consists on beating different levels and set your own record and moreover to compete with your friends. The trends on the most used games are always changing but if we want to find the most downloaded free games they are candy crash, angry birds, triviados… and a lot of others and this are always changing.
  • Information apps: apart from entertainment we use a lot of apps to keep us informed about news, but in this group we can include the google maps or gps or a lot of different applications including all the news apps.
  • Apps related with music: This is the last group of apps and has a lot of success. This group include all the apps related with music and the most popular are Shazam which is an app that let you record and identify a song that you hear, spotify which let you make your lists, discover new songs and share all this, and finally we have the music downloaders that how it’s obvious are used to download often free music.


- Environmental impact: -Costa


This part of the presentation it’s one of the most boring so I will try to be brief. We have to obtain dangerous minerals like coltan to make the smartphones, which has shown to cause damaging effects on the wildlife and the population in the surrounding area. Many incidents have been recorded in these countries, whereby men, women, and children worked at gunpoint to mine for these minerals. The conditions in which they worked were not safe, as the workers did not have the necessary safety equipment. This is one of the most dangerous mineral that we have to use, but if we analyze the phone, there are a lot of plastic, which are made with oil.
We have to say that when we don’t like our Sony Experia, and we want to buy the new Iphone, we want to throw away our old phone and use the new one. Companies have been responsible for improperly recycling their old/used smart phones causing damage to the environment.Cell phones can contain dangerous chemicals such as antimony, cadmium, copper, lead, arsenic, nickel and zinc so we have to recycle the old phones.


-Social impact: -Roger /vidio nomophobia el 2on
This is one of the more important factors to consider and it’s probably the one which have made us decide this topic for the presentation. How I have said at the start of the presentation it’s a really worrying aspect of the smartphones because especially in students they are becoming an obsession. This is undeniable if we look that even the crisis the prices and the sales of smartphones have remained or even have increased in the last two years. The recent studies consider this dependence on the smartphones a type of mental illness.  The name of this illness is called nomophobia that comes from the terms “no mobile phone phobia” and is the fear of forget your smartphone or fear of the battery death.This obsession is more usual in students but it can happens in all ages. The main symptoms can be different behaviors such as sleep just next to your smartphone, have and anxious feeling and can’t be without your smartphone more than 10 minutes, feel separation anxiety when you are without your smartphone, and then there are other exaggerated ones which can be to name your mobile phone.
It hasn’t had to be the most exaggerated situation, but everybody who have a smartphone have a minimum of dependence on its own phone. Moreover the experts say that a lot of people suffer this disorder without being conscious of it. And a lot of experts consider that the fact of bring the mobile everywhere or having the mobile turned on during the class for example is a symptom of the nomophobia.
These studies have shown people who said that without it’s smartphone they feel as they were naked and they can’t follow their daily routine.
Here we have two impressive numbers:
- Approximately more than 50% of the population suffers from nomophobia.
- On average, people look at the mobiles 34 times per day.


-(Future development): -Jaume


As we know, smartphones are the thing that become obsolete quickly. Every year appear a new smartphone with more roles and specifications. But companies have to earn money and obviously wants to do that, if they don’t want to be the last company, they have to improved their smartphones and created tablets and things like that. Now I’m gonna tell to you what we can see in new smartphones the next year.


The last smartphone of Nokia was Nokia Lumia 1020 with a big screen and a camera of 41 megapixels. So you can think, this is a perfect smartphone, but they want more. The next smartphone will be probably Nokia Lumia 1520, with a screen of 6 inch, a capacity of 32 or 64 MB and support of 4G.


Apple have throw two new smartphones, Iphone 5s and Iphone 5C, the last one is low cost and you can have it with some different colours. So for this reason, Samsung want to compete with the company and in 2014 you will see a Samsung Galaxy 5. This will include a processor of 64 bits A7 like Iphone 5S and obviously a screen bigger than 5 inches. Probably you will see a camera with 16 ultra pixels but they want to improve the quality of photos if we take this at night. Nokia, to announced Lumia 1020 they showed the quality of their camera and then they compared photos with other photos took by a smartphone of Samsung. So, you will see 16 ultra pixels and you will take better photos at night. Another different thing will be the materials. The smartphone will be recover by a carbon fibre layer and they do this because he wants more resistance in their smartphones. But, the most important thing that we have never seen is that Samsung Galaxy 5 will be flexible. Maybe you will understand what I’m saying in this video. www.youtube.com/watch?v=      Ix_-uRxIKNs


Lenovo Vibe Z, a Chinese brand, wants to throw a low cost smartphone, with screen of 5.5 inches, support for 4G, etc. This brands started to became stronger in the market because of their prices.



-Conclusion (Jaume): In conclusion we can say smartphones have completely changed our lives and our society. Currently, you can see in the street or in bars that people are only focused in their smartphone. As Roger have said before, there are an illness derived from smartphones and especially teenagers are always connected with their mobiles. This trouble can transform a boys or girls, they started to have bad marks, problems with family or friends etc. But smartphones have provide good and useful things. You can search and share information whatever you want, talk with friends, take photos or videos, etc. Is fascinating what we can do now with our smartphones. So, used it in a good way because the consequences can be bigger than what can we imagine.


We hope you have enjoyed with our presentation and if you have any questions please ask.
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Self-evaluation:

I will put here the self-evaluation and the videos. There are two videos because we didn't finished the presentation the first day so we ended the second day. In my opinion I did it better the second day because I wasn't as nervous as the first day and because I think I knew better what I had to say.


Roger Farrés: Smartphones (with Jaume and David)
Presentation (10%)
Do you use any resources? Are the resources relevant and attractive and focused on the topic? Do they support your presentation? Is the timing 5-7 minutes?
Yes, we used Prezi as the main resource. Moreover we showed some shocking videos to keep the audience focused on the presentation. 
10
Body language and eye contact (10%)
Are you looking at your audience most of the time? Are you reading occasionally from your notes? Are you doing any gestures / movement to hold the attention of the audience?
I think that this was the worst part of my presentation because it’s difficult to look at the audience, and I used to watch a lot the screen.
6
Structure (10%)
Do you organize your ideas in order of importance? Do you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear?
Yes, we did an index, we put the ideas in order, and we use some discourse markers.
10
Content (35%)
Do you introduce interesting, NEW information to your audience? Is your information detailed and clear? Do you give / show examples? Is your information copied from a source or is it original? Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the Internet/books…?
I think we have done an interesting presentation with new information for all the audience because although nowadays almost everybody have smartphone, no everybody knows the history, what they can do with them or the impact they have in the environtment and in themselves. Moreover I think we have talk about the project from different points of view and from differet topics.
35
Language (25%)
Is your grammar correct, complex? Is your vocabulary rich and varied? Do you use sentence linkers? Do you use pause fillers?
I think that I used a correct grammar, with a lot of topic-related vocabulary. About the linkers and the pause fillers I think I have used a few. Even though we can always improve and probably we can improve a lot of gramatical structures.
20
Pronunciation and intonation (10%)
Do you know how to pronounce all your words? Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? Do you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?
I knew how to pronounce the words because I had searched on the google translator and in howjsay. I did it with some breaks to read or pronounce difficult words but in general I think I done it quite fluid. Apart from that I made some pronunciation mistakes like "features" or others but I didn't realize until I see the video and they are because of the nervousness of the moment.
6



Final Mark: (100%)
87%