The first and the last post
First post - an email: http://roger1btx.blogspot.com.es/2012/10/an-email.html
Last post - the end: http://roger1btx.blogspot.com.es/2014/05/the-end.html
These
are my first and my last posts in the blog and the first and obvious difference
is the length of the essays, what I think is due to the increase of the
confidence in the use of English and also to the knowledge of more vocabulary.
About
the structures it’s easy to see the structure is completely different but it’s
not better or worse because the first post have an email or letter structure
while the last post is a “your-say” with a free structure. I think I ordered
the information quite good I both posts separating it into different paragraphs
but while in the first post I only used one connector to link the information
on the last post I used connectors in the starting of almost every paragraph.
Related
to the vocabulary I have that while in the first post I repeated words a lot of
time (a lot of (3), good (2), summer(3)), in the last post I avoided repeating
words. Moreover both compositions have more than 100 words and the register is appropriate
to the extra linguistic situation.
About
the content I think the last post is richer but is understandable because the
first one was only an introduction of myself while the last one is a free
your-say where I talked about a lot of different things.
Finally,
as a curiosity, I want to emphasize that when I started the batxillerat I was
convinced of my future and now I have no idea of what I will do. Moreover in
general I think I have improved during these two years but it hasn’t been
something spectacular.
The first and the last oral
presentation
First
oral presentation – Sports injuries:
Last
oral presentation – Obesity and Overweight:
About
the presentations comparing the two presentations I think I have improved in
content and in vocabulary but in contrast I think that the last oral
presentation was my worst one because I was very nervous and stressed with the
exams. In general I’m proud of the content of all my oral presentations and of
the prezis I have used because I think I have invested a lot of work on it.
Moreover
I evaluate myself on each presentation and I can see that the marks have been
always similar in the fact that the aspect to improve always has been the body
language so I have to admit that I haven’t improved my body language in
presentations during these two years.
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